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-MrSmith is what Jack's first computer and his second computer was MrSmithV2 and third was MrSmithV3 the first MrSmith had 8 gigabytes of RAM and a 2 terabyte hard drive he has said it had a "rubbish graphics card so rendering takes a very long time" he bought it for seven hundred pounds The label says "ADVENT
+MrSmith is what Jack's first computer was called, his second computer was MrSmithV2 and his third was named MrSmithV3. The first MrSmith had 8 gigabytes of RAM and a 2 terabyte hard drive. [[Jack]] has said it had a "rubbish graphics card so rendering takes a very long time", he bought it for seven hundred pounds.
 Model No. DT2213
-Featuring one of intel's top of the range 2nd Generation core desktop CPUs; this quad core i7 PC with added hyper-threading technology breezes through super hungry tasks such as video conversion or editing. With high memory and vasy storage the PC offers a fantastic multimedia experience.
+Featuring one of intel's top of the range 2nd Generation core desktop CPUs; this quad has core i7 PC with added hyper-threading technology.
 - Intel core i7-2600 3.4 GHz Quad core CPU with turbo boost and hyper-threading